am working on a script I want it to be a science fiction classic and I love movies such as Event Horizon and Aliens
The script starts in the endless abyss of space. “Camera pans out from a single star as it does thousands more stars can be seen, space except for the alien masses of rock is empty and devoid of life. As the view of the stars expands we see a superior star ship appear. Behind is a massive whirl of stars and on the event horizon of the wormhole is the black darkness the ship has come from. This superior star ship as the camera expands appears ever smaller in the universe.” script extract
The ship is carrying military personnel along with space tourists they are desperate to see beyond our universe and colonated space. some of the military wanted more than just a ride on the space elevator and could not afford the trip so signed up in the military. The ship encounters a core orbital platform devoid of life. On a 28 day depressurising cycle (every 28 days everything
gets blown out into space. They discover licks of plasma throughout the ship and that according to the logs this platform is billions of years old. They would dock and take the platform back to Earth, but our character wants to see more of Space. The plasma synced creatures attack and they learn of technology so devestating it threatens the very existence of their universe
Jonathan

Yawn. What the heck is original about it?